I don't think I've ever rated you this low before...EVER!...and this hurts my feelz.
You are literally all over the place in this piece, as you stated...you went from off-key, to the original notations. I also have to agree with other posters such as Axelstation, things seem a little higher and others lower than expected. The energy of the piece is what saves you from a 0 bomb (you know I wouldn't 0 bomb you) as it sticks true to the melody of cell...
A perfect Jawline as you say, would probably have to be Cell's Theme upon reviving at the end of the Cell Saga...the energy during those last 5 episodes of his theme was intense.
WIP's are usually loud...but i KNOW you KNOW how to master out the volume... (stares maliciously)
The mastery in this piece can't really be heard...it sounds like some of your earlier submissions back when technology wasn't as...advanced...as it is today.
PLEASE!...for the love of all that is ungodly on newgrounds, drop us something much more, well...MOAR!
Side-Note(off-topic): Your mash-up of the Ninja Gaiden tracks I requested of you, have seen A LOT OF LOVE...don't believe me? Scope it for yourself and seeeeee!
Check your inbox for pancake-flips sake! AND ANSWER THE MESSAGE! (trollface)