I think you have a good sense of harmony and progression. The instruments here sound really inauthentic, though. The mix also sounds strained at many points. For example, it’s hard to hear the woodwinds once the brass comes in at 1:16. I’m not sure Musescore has the capacity to fix that, but if you’re using a Mac I’d highly recommend exporting the piece to Garageband and using an equalizer to try to make each instrument come through clearer. I did enjoy the melodic content in this piece, though. The pacing of the piece is a little fast, although overall the structure and transitions are enjoyable as well. Overall, this is a strong composition, but the mixing and sound design need work. Keep at it, Novent-Music. ;)
7.25/10