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I wrote a full march-like song to kinda show I'm coming back from an involuntary hiatus.

written in a couple of days i tried a little mastering with this one and i think it came out decently (especially considering this is one of my largest songs as far as number of instruments go )

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Watch out for those machine gun attacks on your snare rolls. I'm also not sure why the march is swung, and those rimshots could probably go as far as I'm concerned. The track is missing some... je ne sais quoi.

Writing wise, this is not a bad piece. It's got a definite theme -- could probably use a little overarching melody. I'm not sure how to critique really, as my only other critique would center on your midi instruments. I recommend Black Noh Snare for a more natural synth snare. Probably synful orchestra for natural, low CPU strings and winds.

That's really all I can say.

Novent-Music responds:

Thank you for your review and critique.

I looked back at the song and the snare does sound choppy, so I have taken that into consideration for the future.

Also thank you for the recommendations ill be sure to try them out.

I think it's interesting that you have swing in a marching song. It makes things sound a lot less steady and domineering than you'd expect, and it has a bit less energy, too. I don't feel like the slow laziness was intended, otherwise you probably would have played to your strengths and made it more decisively slow. As it is, the tone of this song seems kind of inconsistent.

Novent-Music responds:

Thank you for your review.

It seems as though I need to work on clarity and consistency of tone.
I will take that into account and try to improve in the future.

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Uploaded
Jul 9, 2018
1:19 PM EDT
Genre
Cinematic
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1.8 MB
1 min 58 sec

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