I love the concept of this song, and I see that you put some effort into mastering, but it needs some boom and some more variety! The drums sound a bit weak in comparison to the rest of the silky paddy song. Of course I have a preference for house music that has more rigid basslines and hard hitting subby kicks so that may be influencing my judgement a bit, but the drums are almost always the foundation of the song, and in this song they appear to be... lacking.

Other than the drums, I feel like some manual modulation and maybe a plucky bass would have made this song especially wonderful. It's got decent structure, decent composition, a few more steps and it could be a masterpiece!