I like the sense of climax into :15. I think the synths are a little generic, and the sweeps seem a bit...undressed. There are a lot more creative things you could’ve done with them. The frantic melodies at :41 are pretty cool, and with a bit more of a build-up that could’ve been a really euphoric section. I like the section at 1:09 that strips away the energy, too. You have a good sense of phrasing and progression, and the racecar (I think?) FX that comes in at various points fits in well. It’s a shame you didn’t put a little more effort into the composition here, because this piece has a lot of potential. I’d suggest fleshing out the structure a little more and switching up the instrumentation. After that, this’ll be a killer track! Keep at it, AndChicken. ;)
Granted I'm not a newgrounds music expert by any means but I still enjoy this song, In fact I'd say it's pretty good!
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