Mh, good even if it could be better. Theme is a bit too repetitive and the instruments be out of tune (for example at 1:30). Anyway i think you can do better ;)
Thank you for the review! But let me explain, haha. First off, yes, the theme is a little too repetitive, but listen to just about any song these days, and you'll hear that it plays the same instrumentation from start to finish. My art style with music is definitely "different". I'm all about layering up synths that complement each other and build as a whole together by the end.
Now for the out of tune, that would be that I distorted that particular synth and added purposeful tone differentials to make it stick out more, but not too much, which is why the volume is cut off of it a bit. I guess that this is the only detuned synth, so it doesn't exactly fit in this specific song. I get your case, and your opinion is your opinion, haha, I am just defending mine.
All in all, this is definitely not one of my better works, but it is still one of them, and for that, I embrace any criticism this may take full heartedly. Thanks again for your review!
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