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Author Comments

I've been on NG for nearly a year now, and I've come a long way. My first song published was Quirky Pigs, which had a really catchy melody. I've come a really long way since then, and I can still keep going, but only with your help. Ths is by far my best song, but how do I make it better? If you can, please comment - there is always room for improvment, I think. In anyone.

Do you like it?
Is it my best?
How do I make it better?


Here is my SoundCloud Page: https://soundcloud.com/thegrandschememusic

(I'm not very big on there yet.)


Nice song!, but like others said, the bass is underused and too much clashing. Other than that I really liked it. :)

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Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. I will take out the clashes!

Don't get me wrong, this isn't a bad song, but the parts DO occasionally clash. The bass could maybe have been a bit more used- trance is based a lot around driving and rolling basslines.
The thing that really could have been improved on was at the beginning when the slapped instrument came in with that contrasting melody. That made it less trance and more carnival-y.

Trance really has a hard-house style to it, so focus more on the beats and bass, and less on melodies and chord sequences.

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Squeegee4554 responds:

That's great advice - thank you.

Watch it when your notes clash with your chords; It could produce a beautiful sound, or, unfortunately, in this case, an out-of-place tone. It kind of ruined the song for me...

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. I'll try that then...

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Credits & Info

4.32 / 5.00

Dec 11, 2016
4:46 AM EST
File Info
3.5 MB
3 min 3 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.