I've been on NG for nearly a year now, and I've come a long way. My first song published was Quirky Pigs, which had a really catchy melody. I've come a really long way since then, and I can still keep going, but only with your help. Ths is by far my best song, but how do I make it better? If you can, please comment - there is always room for improvment, I think. In anyone.

Do you like it?
Is it my best?
How do I make it better?

Thanks,
SqueeGee

Here is my SoundCloud Page: https://soundcloud.com/thegrandschememusic

(I'm not very big on there yet.)