Despite what the other guy said, I just noticed that you're only 14 and you're making this kind of thing already. KEEP IT UP! I don't know what this is a remix of, but you're doing really well for your age. This is very simple and repetitive, but everything is in key, it has energy and a melody, nothing in the mix is weirdly loud or muffled, which is A LOT more than what I can say for many people on here.
You're doing well. Keep learning and keep going, man :)
Meh. Just meh. You could have taken out the first 17 seconds and made it better. Plus this remix lacks almost any variation. It's way too repetitive. Also, you overused that same drum beat way too much!
Ok. Thanks for the feedback.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
* Remix of a third-party piece.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.