I loved the introduction, but the rest sounded all over the place. :/

This was different

This was pretty different I do like what you have here but there needs to be a few changes like much more build ups and much more build downs then you can have more shock value and these are just ideas because this is a decent piece if you ask me, and regardless of what I write here you have to be comforble with your style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there needs to be a few changes like much more build ups and much more build downs.

~X~

Heyo!

House is awexome, but to me this sounds a bit industrial.

Decent

Starts off a bit slow, but then it gets all good. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

Nice work

Nice loop, it just feels like a beat that could get a place jumping. Keep it up!