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my second submission, for pico & friends. enjoy!!

its kind of rough--i finished most of hte song in the course of an hour since i decided to play it at school but never finished it. nevertheless, i think its tight :D gimme feedback.

review me, and ill review you. got it??


Nice, but..

I couldn't just bring myself to give this a 5.
You've done better and I think it could be the bassline, but something just isn't there.
Still, danceable music.


Hm, the bass definitely doesn't fit the mood. The strings would have fit if you had written for broader chords (maybe some higher up notes thrown in there) - cause then it's like Bob Sinclar or something, string samples.

I loved the rhythm - except for the claps, which felt awkward. Possibly a lowpass.


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p4c responds:

got it master :) im probably not gonna come back to this [at least, for a while] so ill think of this stuff later.

Nice rythms

really enjoyed every minute of this song, but it was too latin sometimes. The chimes were nice, and all the FX came together nicely. The beat was great, the looping wasnt. Sometimes it got repititive, not like you wereusing the same thing but in the same style a lot. Try adding like a real chorus or something. Great job.


p4c responds:

hehe ill consider it, tho not the looping part--if someone wants a loopable version they can pm me or something, tho i think ill keep my songs as... you know... songs lol. thx for ur thoughts :)


Not a fan of the beat, but that's just because I don't like the styles. They are well-crafted though.

It sounds like you used the FL Peak Controller in your song, but I'm not sure if you used FL to begin with. It sounds awfully similar to one of the tutorial songs, coincidence?

It's still a nice melody that blends with the drums though, nice use of sound FX too.

-Review Request Club-

p4c responds:

haha nope i use reason, i tried fl with my friend before tho [the result is in another submission] but i jst dont know it well enuf to do much with it haha. tho the effect is the same--its called sidechaining, involves compressors if ur interested.

yeah it doesnt seem that house is very popular around these parts, but ill still crank out some eveery now and then. thx for the rev :)

Pretty Sweet.

This is a pretty cool audio, it has a nice beat to it and i like the variety within in the track. The chimes every now and again are a nice touch and i like the variation at 2.10, it provides something completely different to the rest of the track. Keep up the good work.

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p4c responds:

yayy me! [btw danngngg i was gone for a week and the review request club gave me liek 11 reviews... i like this!]

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Credits & Info




4.04 / 5.00

Mar 14, 2008
11:05 PM EDT
File Info
5.5 MB
3 min 22 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.