- The drums are a bit low for my taste, or maybe it's the bass/background playing too loud and overlapping with the kick
- Nice drop at around 1.20
- I was expecting more variety around 2.00, add something to keep the listener interested, or drop something, as long as you change something. This goes on for other 30 seconds, then there's a little build up and it's all fine next section coming in
- I'd add some reverb or another FX to some of the sounds, especially the high lead around 2.50 that play long notes
- I like the last synth/lead but sometimes it is too high pitched, try to remove some of the higher frequencies, it kinda hurts lul
I was expecting a better ending TBH for an "epic" song. It has some epic feel for sure, but I'd say it's more electronic than epic. The melody is sure epic driven
4/5 I enjoyed the piece, wasn't bad in overall terms
Thanks for your detailed feedback! It helps!
Wow, what an ambient track. This thing could me into an amazing sleep. This is also very well balanced and mixed, I can clearly hear all of the parts of the song, never any clipping or overlapping; very well spaced. And for a trance (if that's the genre you were going for) track, it has a very infectious rhythm, especially in the beginning of it. Near the end, I really love the distorted square you have going on, gives the fade out a lost and dark vibe. I suppose the only somewhat negative thing I could say about this is that I wish you would have been a bit more unique with your instrumentation choice, that would have made this perfect. Not that it's bad, I've just heard the square and minimalist FM synth with clicky percussion quite a lot in this genre. Nevertheless, amazing song. Keep it up.
Glad you liked it! Thanks!