The melodies are great but the sound of instruments is too loud. You should check the CPU meter, if the waves become red, you should reduce the volume of instruments..the melody becomes irritating due to this, or maybe you intended it that way?
Thanks for the feedback! I've never tried using the CPU meter, but it could help me mix the track better.
As for the the extreme repetition of the melody, I guess I did want it turn out like that, but I'll keep that fact that it did get slightly annoying into consideration for next time.
Btw! Check out my new dubstep track ~Fervor~, It turned out very nice!
I think you should consider throwing a limiter over your master track. It sounds like you're getting some clipping due to having too many overpowering sounds. Everything you have here is great and I especially like the melodies, usually that is hard to come by. So all the musical talent and creativity is there, but there's just some technical issues.
Thanks for the feedback, it is super helpful. I do agree with what you are saying about limiting the sounds. The technical stuff is really my only problem in production, I'm just not sure how to do all that yet.