Overall its very good, but I don't feel the drop...
The drop makes me give one star less but still good!

I feel like your remix has more substance than mine, since I was told mine was kind of empty. This has more to it, which is good. The drop is strange, but you can get better. I cheated by not making a drop xD!! So if I make a new version, I will try to drop the bass. Now I usually make my own house tracks, because I make not very good dubstep/glitchhop/DnB at the moment. By the end of your remix it is kind of claustrophobic, because too much is going on. However you have good variety. Someone told me that less is more, but to an extent. Try to apply that. I never heard of Sonar X3, so I don't know specifics on improving on it, but I think you will get better, with experience. I know I have greatly changed since my Windfall remake. Good luck with your music!!!