The bass is really loud, And the mixing in general is pretty ehhh. The melody is very basic, And it stays that way through the entire song, Making it kinda repetitive. It also sounds very empty in some bits, Even though the parts where there are more melodies sound really chaotic because of the meh mixing. But I do like some of the instruments you used.
I hope my feedback helped you a bit. :)
Yeah, thanks for the feedback. I really just started working on electronic music two months ago, so I'm new to most of this stuff. As you said I do need to work on mixing, I have the most trouble with that. If you have any suggestions or tips on how I could improve, I would love to hear them. Thanks.