This is a cute piece! You have a pretty good sense of harmony too. I think the kick is a bit too in-your-face. You might want to try either lowering the volume or Equalizing it more to get rid of some the those middle tones. I often try to create two peaks with the kick, one sub-bassy and the other around 500 Hertz, although you should do what works for you, as long as it doesn't sound too jarring. :) The track doesn't have a lot of structural or rhythmic variation, though. I can see you tried to add some around 1:36, yet you don't really transition into that part or back into the "refrain" at 1:50. Even a simple crash or sweep could go a long way. With the pseudo-breakbeat style you have here, I'd probably recommend using a crash as opposed to a sweep. It's pretty minimalistic overall, and you don't really introduce any new instruments throughout the piece. I also thought the fade-out ending was a bit lazily done (as fade-out endings usually are). It has potential, and I like the cute, upbeat mood, but you could've done A LOT more with this. It needs more of a direction - climaxes, transitions, build-ups, etc. Right now, it's quite flat and dry, structure-wise. If you add in more structural elements, harmonies and variation, though, this could potentially be a pretty solid piece. Hope this helped. Keep at it, Attak1616! ;)

6/10