First thing I noticed immediately is the shaker sample. It's super loud and annoying. Definitely would tone that way down in the future. Liked the weird drunk sounding synth you used, but it sounded like you were using randomly selected notes at one point. There's some interesting ideas in here, they just could have been utilized in a much more structured manner. Don't be afraid to keep it weird, just make it a manageable weird XD.

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I don't really understand the progression of this song. The percussion is too loud, and the lead melody sounds offbeat and sloppy. The drop felt empty, and generally this whole song feels hollow and bland. I guess this song's concept isn't terrible, but the composition feels thrown together and sloppy.