It's catchy and upbeat, and I admire your sense of harmony. The synth at :02 sounds way too harsh and in-your-face, though. I would suggest equalizing it more to eliminate some of those high tones. It's fast-paced, yet structurally sound and smooth-flowing. I like how you start varying the melody at around the 1-minute mark, and then providing some structural relief around 1:10. The mixing is rather good as far as I can tell; I can hear all of the instruments clearly throughout. The modulation at around 1:40 also helped keep me engaged. I thought the ending was cute and also conclusive. Its fast-paced nature makes it quite fitting for a videogame. This is a really solid piece overall, Jonadrew. I'm impressed! Keep up the good work, man. ;)
Nicely spaced out, with some good bass. I like the layering here, I like the elements of the song. It is like old 8-bit, but more modern. Reminds me of johnfm's stuff (he's pretty good). However, you didn't mention what category this would be entered in :P what would it be? Nice job.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.