Compositionally, this is a pretty good piece. However, there was some sort of extremely harsh and high-pitched synth at :03 that simply shattered my eardrums. Sorry. I suggest you A) make it a lot quieter and B) use the Equalizer to get rid of the highest, harshest tones in that instrument. There was also a bit of harshness around :35. Other than that, I enjoyed the upbeat mood and melodic content. I thought the drums were a little quiet and, while panning is an important step in learning to mix, it had other balance and/or mastering problems at times. Still, it makes a pretty good loop, and I admire your sense of rhythm and harmony. Keep up the good work, man! ;)