The question is...

Do you really need Serum? 'Cause I can tell you right now, it's sounds pretty swell without it.

I'll agree with neB that the drums could use toning down. They are hella compressed and aren't breathing like they should - very much on the muddy side of things as well. Also agree that you've got the highs nailed, but the mids are lacking and the sub could be even warmer than it currently is.

Love the melody. The synth is great; just a little more thickness is all it needs. Otherwise, for a WIP, impressive. I eagerly await the finished product!

Cheers!

-J.P.

synths, melodies and FX sound great! not my style of dnb but still good although it does seem a bit empty in the middle. The main thing letting the tune down is the drums. they sound really flat and squashed like fuck. Also I'm not really hearing much low end. The drums and bass are essential in DnB!

Anyway I can tell it's a work in progress so all this can be fixed! keep it up mate. Would love to hear the finished thing.