A little low in volume as far as the mix goes, (could just be my speakers) everything else sounds great. A lot of emotion flowing through the vocals, which is a bonus in my opinion. Great work!

Excellent! I love the energy and intensity in the guitar riffs. You went for a very edgy sound here, although I didn't think it flowed very well into :57. Your voice is very soulful and emotional. I especially like the guitar riff at 1:31. It's very catchy and contributes a lot to the progression of the piece. I would've loved to have the lyrics (I'm terrible at discerning lyrics), and it is a bit short. The structure of this piece is kind of bizarre. As I see it, it kind of goes from hook (:00) to verse (:23) to breakdown (:57) to what could've functioned as an awesome re-intro if there was an intro in the first place (1:09) to outro (1:52). It's a short piece that might need some structural considerations, but other than that I love your sound here, man. Solid mixing, high-quality vocals and a lot of emotion make this piece really cool. Keep up the good work, and I'm sorry we couldn't accept you into the Knock-out Round of my competition. ;)

== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

Wow, this piece! You are an awesome singer and an awesome guitarist, and I am really impressed by the professional quality of the mix and playing. Though for some reason I am having trouble getting into this piece as much as I would expect. The arrangement, the transitions - all of the pieces are very well done, it's just that the composition is not exactly as good as I'd expect. It's still very good, though, mind you! So keep it up - can't wait to hear more from you in the future.

Mini-scores (Note: See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Mixing: 4/4
* Composition: 3/4
* Arrangement: 4/4

I am actually really digging ur stuff. I love that kind of hybrid progressive/ambient/heavyasbuff feel. I will be going through all your songs.

This sounds so awesome!!!... dude, please finish an EP, do some touring, and come to Peru :D... I can get you here some nice gigs :)