// Absolutely! Yes please kind sir!!!!
/// PLEASE I BEG YOU USE THIS SONG IM SO MAD IT DIDNT GET IN A GAME IM NOT EVEN USING PUNCTUATION PLEASE AAAHHHHHHHH!!!

All kidding aside... I would love to have you use this song, especially since I did write it for a game! The only thing I'd ask for is a heads-up if there's an opportunity for me to see it online :)

About the jumbled thing: He's actually somewhat right, not just from like a musicwriting standpoint, but just from a "sound clarity" standpoint due to my lack of proper mixing on this track. With YOUR permission, I'd like to send you a better .mp3 that will actually have been fully mastered. Just give me a heads up on the best way to get it to you and it's done!

ORRRRRRRRRRR just use the song on Newgrounds. Either way, thanks for making it feel like writing this song was worth it!

This and all the other nice/honest reviews and awesome votes, that is :P

[But if the song actually ends up in a sweet game... most definitely this]

Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad to get some honest critiquing of what I wrote.

I agree with you that the song feels too fast and sped up. It's partially meant to feel this way to give a sense of urgency to the matter at hand since the song should be in the background. But mostly it sounds rushed because I wrote out the entire piece, then cranked it up by about 35 dbs because I thought it sounded more urgent and like a boss battle. But, as a side effect, it still sounds very rushed. It's like when in an orchestra, the players begin to play faster than the conductor is conducting, and he has to try and keep up with them while trying to still maintain control.

It absolutely was written as "miniboss" as the original name and as I wrote it I just had "level 1 boss" in mind (which actually was probably going to be a lower-tier bullet hell introduction), so I have to say you nailed that spot on :P

But thanks for spending the time to check me out!