A bit better than other songs, good job!
But I still have some feedback:

You really need some mastering. This is way too quiet, and given the selected genre, this doesn't fit.
Song structure is crucial for this genre. If you were to picture someone dancing to this at a party on full speakers, what would everyone else's perspective be?
Yes, you have a good piano, not to mention the melody and chords, but it's still really empty.
Having it in an intro or a breakdown, etc would be an excuse to emptiness.
If you wanna get better, you really have to try.

This is only my opinion, so please don't take it offensively.
I'm strict on reviewing, and point out anything that needs improvement, but only because I know you're capable of good music. You just need an extra shove to get there.
You're making your way, but you can definitely go further, so I'll give you the extra half star for effort.

You know me! - Honest review time : >

Its a decent start however the first minute of the song sounds very repetetive and flat :/ Also I dont like the simplicity of the track and repeated sounds - The track is just a bit too boring for me Im afraid But its still a decent attempt and actually quite impressive what youve done with just 3 instruments and a bongo! its just the fact that there isnt really much to listen to that resulted in a low rating :/

I hoe this helped :3

Amazing

Not bad