Yes! This is much better! It's a bit louder for one thing, but still:
I compared this song volume to mastered songs, and I've come to the part where I'm disappointed you didn't learn anything, except making stuff louder by a decibel or two.
I like the piano. It's very classical, but the genre doesn't say classical, so it doesn't fit.
All I heard in this song was a piano, some percussion, and that's it.
That's never it for dance, especially with that song structure.
This is not a song people would rave to, or even move to.
Maybe this song as a whole can work as a semi-intro, but still.
So nothing has changed, except volume by a couple of decibels.
I'm disappointed by now, Ryan.
You keep making the same mistakes.
You're capable of really good music, but you're just being lazy.
I used to be lazy with songs I used to dare call "Dance", and let's just say, there's a reason they're not uploaded.
When you're not lazy, you're not bad.
Making music is tough, but if you're putting as much effort as everyone else truthfully, you should be able to produce music as good as others.
If, however, you ARE putting the same effort as others when making your music currently, that's not an excuse. That means you're just not as good yet, and you need lots of practice.
You'll need more effort to pull it off, so put more effort.