I had a lot of fun creating this song. Not once did I hit a "writer's block" at all while making this, and everything came easily. For once, I actually felt like I knew what to add next to the song to make it progress. MrUnderlay, if you are listening to this song, you can go ahead and criticize me for how I didn't take my own advice and ended the song on a cliffhanger... Haha.
Please leave a review that explains what you do or don't like about the song, especially if you vote under 3/5. All constructive criticism is appreciated! Please listen to the whole song before reviewing so that your review is on the whole song and not just one part. Last of all, please enjoy!
Carl565
I 100% agree with the person below me. I have been a fan of your music since corridors and loved them all but I think they would be even better if they had more of a drop. I also make geometry dash levels and its more fun to creat one that has a drop.
Anyways it doesn't matter what you make next ill still listen and give it a rating probably not a review as i dont know much about music and i dont want to be that guy who just says that they loved it.
Looking forward to more music. :)
Wow! Well, I'm glad that you came out of the shadows to make a review! You have no idea how proud that makes me that I have a fan. I never knew people paid close attention to my various new works, like you and MrUnderlay. Thank you so much.
As for a drop, I should definitely look up tutorials on how to make proper ones. Two things that I really am not good at are drops and intros, haha.
Thanks again, man. You've made my day!
On a side note, Corridors is probably my favorite song that I've made.
That opening was absolutely amazing!! The whole use of that synth was just great and like how it panned around. There isn't really anything I disliked, but there is something I would have done differently.
To me, this felt like it needed one meaty, bassy kick to go along with it. I was disappointed the kick just wasn't what I was expecting, but then again that was probably your intention so I can't be too saddened.
Overall 4.5/5. Will send head in circles
You liked the intro? I think that's what made me like this song so much. I'm usually not too good at making intros.
You know what? Just for you in the future, I'll have to consider making my kicks heavier. It's just hard because of the fact that if I make them too punchy, they seem to really overpower the song with their bass. I could obviously EQ that, but then it makes them less punchy when you take out bass... And now you see why I never really tried messing with it in the first place, haha. I don't know, maybe I'm just overlooking it and it's not that complicated.
Thanks again for another awesome review. You never fail to make me happy, man. Have you been working on anything recently? I'll keep track of your work, but message me if you ever release anything new.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
carl565 
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