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Don't Take Me Away - Preview

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I have been working on this for most of the day now, and so far it seems pretty good. I thought I should take a break, so I made a small preview. Hopefully you guys enjoy it, I really spent a lot of my day on this. If you vote under 3/5 or 7/10 please leave why in your review.

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Critique

Now I know you might think I'm hating on your track, but I'm just trying to help/critique. Sounded way to simple in my mind. There was nothing unique about it. There was usually only 1 or two instruments playing one note at a time, which made it sound really flat. Try adding chords or more percussion to it and make it more interesting. Simple can be good, but you need to make it interesting. My suggestion would be to study some of your favorite trance songs and attempt to recreate them. Try youtubing some tutorials as well for the program you're using. The song seemed to be lacking in bass too, so maybe add a louder synth bass or something. Now I'm assuming you're just starting or have started not too long ago, so I salute you in your efforts. It's really not that bad for not being extremely experienced as others. Keep up the efforts man, if you have any questions feel free to PM me.

5/5 (so others can critique :] )
6/10

carl565 responds:

Man, thank you so much for the review, i really appreciate it. this will help me finish it. i liked every thing i read about it except the last part, haha, i have actually been making music for 4 years now. well anyways, thanks again.

Credits & Info

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Listens
1,049
Faves:
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Downloads
84
Score
Waiting for 4 more votes

Uploaded
Feb 20, 2011
12:33 AM EST
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
1.5 MB
1 min 18 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.