I like the organic guitar sound at the beginning. The vocals are generally good, but I think you need to enunciate your consonants more because it's hard to determine what you're saying at times. I would appreciate it if you left the lyrics in the description in the future. It's a pretty well-structured piece, and I like the warm, feel-good vibe it has. The simplicity gives it a really human quality. The ending was a bit sudden and inconclusive IMO. I also think the echo effects you used at 1:42 sort of detracted from the organic, down-to-earth vibe I thought you were going for. You probably could've done more with dynamic contrast and melodic development, too. Still, I admire your sense of harmony and progression, and it's a very smooth-flowing piece. Overall, I like it! Keep up the good work, Norway69. ;)

7.5/10

The guitar chords used are so good. Very enjoyable. The vocals aren't too bad, good on the tone and way better than I can sing. The chorus is alright, but the chords before and after are what really got me. The quality is quite well for actually playing guitar. The tempo is on point. Could have added more of a bridge and outro, but it was good for what you did. And good job for only taking five hours on it. 2 thumbs up.

Nice song! I think the ending was kinda repetitive and you could add some reverb in your vocals, but I really liked it anyway :D