I gave you a two for trying. Get some practice, and exercise better techniques. Also find a band. I know its hard but they'll make you better. :>
It's a little rough, and it would be revisited if I was given the ok :) I do not own the rights to this song, and all credit for music goes to http://fleshbag.newgrounds.com/ all vocals and lyrics credited to me.
I gave you a two for trying. Get some practice, and exercise better techniques. Also find a band. I know its hard but they'll make you better. :>
I'll give you a little background into this: It was done in front of my computer as an almost improv on a headset. I usually would put a lot more time into it, but I don't want to waste my time seeing as its just up here until the creator responds to me. Also I am in a band, and If it wasn't all covers I'd post some of that here :) appreciate the comment though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.