Heel warm" Where it all began
Hot flaming
Furnace of creation
Interstellar diversification
A home for everything"

This sounds so neat and spacey! (I know others have said that too, but really, 'spacey' describes your music so well.)

I really loved the instrumentation you've got going on here. You've got all these almost psychedelic synths that are just really soft and work really well with the reverb-ful drums and pads and whatever panning gritty spacey effect that is that comes in at 2:04. Speaking of 2:04, though, it felt like some of your transitions were a bit forced. 2:04 comes to mind, and so does 2:47. (although I really liked the one you had at 3:16!) Also speaking of 2:04, The melodies there felt like they lacked... something. I don't really think I'm qualified enough to give you specific melodic advice, but here's a bit of melody advice that I find really helpful (hey, that author looks familiar!) - http://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/1wmtzy/tips_on_writing_melodies/

At 2:47 when the track changes up the most, those eighth note hits were a bit jarring the first time I heard the song, but I've come to enjoy them after listening a few times, especially with the really creative drum fills behind them. I didn't really see a problem with your drum EQs throughout the piece (except for maybe that 2:47 thing being a bit too loud), and the rest of your mixing was pretty nice.

Great work! u r poet

This song is done in a style that I recognize as very you.

That is, I've never heard a song like it from any other composer, though I've heard several like it from you.

How should I describe it... those lingering organ and pad notes, that slide up and down instead of changing notes with a punch. I'm not doing a very good job of it. Well, you probably know what I mean anyway, and I can point out which ones it's similar to later if you want.

I would call it the best in its style from you so far. I really like your placement of the drum hits throughout the song. Especially when those "paper-fan" style drums start layering over top of themselves around 3:00. It feels neat, like they're drawing a box around my head or something.

I felt a bit lost during my first listen. I didn't have any clue as to what would happen next. This may be due to my unfamiliarity with this style, since I only had your previous pieces to draw on. Due to that I did draw heavily on my recollection of those pieces while listening to this one, which may have lead me to view it as "one of them" and as such place my expectations of it lower than they should have been, resulting in less appreciation of it on the first listen.

On subsequent listens however I started to get a feel for how it goes, and though it feels a bit "out there", I like it. I guess space is pretty "out there" too.

Good job once again!