Excellent feel for this one, it transports you through its sounds to the world you want us to exist in for a while.
If I had one criticism it's that it doesn't flow as a whole. everything is basically always following the same rhythm or the lead melody. For full impact you need to separate foreground and background, not necessarily always, but for example around 1:05ish it's pretty evident what I'm saying and I think you missed an opportunity to develop the piece further.
Good luck in NGADM!