not bad ig, the orchestration is gud but it gets kinda repetitive
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not bad ig, the orchestration is gud but it gets kinda repetitive
orchestration and instrument choices are good, snare rolls go hard 🔥 🔥 🔥
I like the big/epic style you have here. It fits well with the title that you have here. Overall I think you have a decent work, but nothing really stands out to me. Unfortunately, I'm weaker at giving feedback on orchestral works, but as far as the production quality, I think the instrumentation quality is fine. It feels decently balanced and there's decent use of panning. I don't know if I agree with the idea of using one electronic synth at 1:06 if that's the only spot you use it. It's not that it's a good use of it, but I'm just curious why you would use it once and not as like a stylistic choice to help give a narrative to the piece. For example, a common trope is to use organic instruments as clean and natural and to use electronic instruments as corruption, see Fellow Feeling by Porter Robinson. Another direction you could go is say that it's human forces collaborating or in contention with alien forces, organic instruments symbolizing human and electronic symbolizing alien. Otherwise, the composition, as I said earlier, has a large scale feel too it, but I don't think it has any specific high and low points until the very end. There are some good dynamics which I appreciate, but maybe my mind just isn't latching on too well to what you're doing and I get lost over the longer phrases that you're doing and that's what's causing me to think that each section doesn't progress well.
Overall, it's a very pretty piece that has a big feel. I think it's pretty decent.
I'm quite digging this :)
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