HAHA FINALLY
I found someone who has a chance at beating me
in the contest

You my friend are a major threat to pretty much everyone in the contest

you make want to try
Great job on this song too
I hope you can make it to the final round

The feel of the song is great, the pacing is solid and the progression is wonderful. Let's focus on how to improve it. You're missing an integral part of drum and bass. The bass. This track is missing it's low end. It ends up sounding very bright and top heavy. Add a bass line that fills out the low end. The drums have a good beat but they are sitting a little wonky in the mix. The kick and snare are very prominent but all the other drums are almost nonexistent, which gives them a very lonely sound as if your drum beat is only two drums. You need to bring your hats and ghost snares up in the mix to fill out the song and make sure that you have a solid mix of mids and highs. I look forward to seeing what you come out with next.

Nice intro, the strings are really captivating. The drums could use some work though, as it IS DnB. Perhaps mastering, compression or sidechaining? Overall the song is very nice ;)