Wow nice

This was beautiful I love the lyrics on this and the voice quality behind the music playing was very well done Tracks like these that come around now and then are pretty rare because this brings alot to the table with lots to wonder in the mind and these are sometimes called mystical thats the vibe I got from this one Well thats my review, I know nothing too crazy or spectacular but I did want to say that it was a pleasure of some music or sound, great lyrics on this

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Hey, I like this! :D Your voice is pretty, and I really liked the lyrics. One thing you might want to work on a bit is the balance: the "doo doo doo-doos" sort of cover up the lyrics sometimes. Also, I think it needs more of a conclusive ending. As it is, it sort of just ends. At one point, I think around 1:05-1:12, the vocals lost a bit of their energy. Otherwise, the vocals were 10x better than anything I could make! ;) You have a lot of potential, oOzeroOo, so I'm scouting you! Keep up the great work! :D

I really Like this alot! I don't know what's intentional and what's not but this feels beautiful for its simplicity naturalness of it. The song feels like it embraces the little imperfection of the sounds quality and really sounds well. Kinda of reminds me of mumblecore films that accept simple realness of simple everyday life and bring life to it. Only thing I would have to say is what wingowinston said about bring out the words or articulate the word better so the lyrics can be heard. Other than that, stellar job!

I adore this song. My only criticism is that you should either enunciate your words better for the melody. That or lower the volume of the harmony slightly and then this song will sound even more awesome. If I were to end the song I'd fade out of the harmony. That might sound better than a cut off. Well done.