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Jun 11, 2014 | 12:36 AM EDT
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3.2 MB
2 min 19 sec
4.44 / 5.00

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Rated 4.44 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Please don't take this too seriously, it's basically the only thing I have ever made that's even close to being acceptable, so I wanted more people to hear it. Don't know what I can do about the awkward silence at the end, so it's there.

Also, didn't know what to classify this as, so I put it as misc.

And maybe it will make you guys feel better about yourselves 'cuz you realize that you're not a zero.

Lyrics for those who can't understand what I'm singing (or are curious, I guess):
Take this heart of mine
I don’t really really care
It’s all right by me
Just take it away
I left it behind
oh so long ago
I don’t really care
About it anymore

Ill take what you have offered
With no regrets
But realize the cost
of every drop of blood
you will have to spill for this

Left behind in a day
I didn’t really understand
Left behind
I was lost
so long ago
I don’t remember
where I came from




Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hey, I like this! :D Your voice is pretty, and I really liked the lyrics. One thing you might want to work on a bit is the balance: the "doo doo doo-doos" sort of cover up the lyrics sometimes. Also, I think it needs more of a conclusive ending. As it is, it sort of just ends. At one point, I think around 1:05-1:12, the vocals lost a bit of their energy. Otherwise, the vocals were 10x better than anything I could make! ;) You have a lot of potential, oOzeroOo, so I'm scouting you! Keep up the great work! :D

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

I really Like this alot! I don't know what's intentional and what's not but this feels beautiful for its simplicity naturalness of it. The song feels like it embraces the little imperfection of the sounds quality and really sounds well. Kinda of reminds me of mumblecore films that accept simple realness of simple everyday life and bring life to it. Only thing I would have to say is what wingowinston said about bring out the words or articulate the word better so the lyrics can be heard. Other than that, stellar job!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

I adore this song. My only criticism is that you should either enunciate your words better for the melody. That or lower the volume of the harmony slightly and then this song will sound even more awesome. If I were to end the song I'd fade out of the harmony. That might sound better than a cut off. Well done.

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