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Seems I have a problem with making my songs sound different from each other OTL. I'm sorry T^T
100% honest though, I really am working on trying to figure out instruments, I promise. But it will still be several more days (which means weeks) until I get something working for me, so I made this one for fun in the meantime (mostly for my fun, but whatever).
Anywaysies, have a good day!
hugs and (air)kisses,
zero

Lyrics for the curious and critical:
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
(continuous)
counting down the beats
until it’s all over again
don’t let me let go
cuz if I do
it will be over
and i’ll have nothing left

an you take my hand
one last time
before I give up
will it be simpler
just to forget this?

promises falling
to the pavement again
I broke them all
so long ago
lost in time

counting down the beats
one last time

TL;DR- This song like others. Sorry. Instruments coming soon. XOXO, 0

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G30

2014-07-10 03:29:37

Wow, is that your voice?!! Very soothing, dreamy, like floating on air. I love the relaxed chill and deep feel it brings at the same time. Like the reviewer said below the only thing I would recommend would be a bit more variety to spike it maybe at one point, i feel like you are building up to that high point, feeed mee! , but honestly its awesome the way it is. I have a lot to learn in my composing but you have a natural talent, keep going!

TaintedLogic

2014-07-09 22:48:11

I really like the sort of drone-like and pensive quality the first minute or so of this one had. It also was pretty climactic and all with the harmonies that started coming in around 1:43. Your pieces don't really have a lot of dynamic contrast in them, but that might be easier to fix once you start incorporating more instruments into your tracks. I really like the whole "countdown" idea, though...I thought that was pretty creative. May I ask what program you use to make/record these tracks? ;)

oOzeroOo responds:

Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts! Hopefully, you're right about the instruments cuz I feel really nervous about using them (>m<") I record using Garageband, though I'm a total dunce when it comes to trying to go beyond the basics :P