Yes originality! I love the first impressions to this track! ^_^ While originality seems to stand throughout the song, I feel one particular element is somewhat overused, perhapes the song can be broken into two seperated by a more undertoneish beat with a slightly different tune just to dilute the lack of variety. When I heard this one at first, I thought this one was going to be great, but the overused elements do get tired and this track loses appeal quickly. This track does have potential, try getting advice from some of the experts around here. I think this track could be great, though maybe it'll be one of those projects that collect dust for a few years before being reworked and actually released which is also fine. As you grow as a musician, maybe keep your eye on this one. Though 4.84 stars at the time of this review is pretty fantastic, I think this one could be alot better. But how? Good question, idk, be creative! Experiment! Throw stuff at it and see how things sound. I wish I could be more specific/helpful. :P
Yeah, when I made this song, I was a bit obsessed with that one rhythm that I made, and I kind of overused it :P
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