A little bit of constructive criticism. For future songs, instead of panning the channel all the way +100 or -100, try anywhere from 25-15%, depending on how much you want the channel to be "there" Also stereo separation is nice. Give that a try, and you'll songs will be a lot better. Do that, and i'll give you an extra star.
Thanks for the tips! I'll be sure to keep all of that in mind when I'm making the full version of this ;)
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