hmm its a nice peace, its clear you have improved but mastering wise it kinda lacks the 'clearness'
the vocals are a nice addition to the song, like you said yourself it gives an extra kick, which it does perfectly!
however, im kinda missing a low bass.. i dont have subwoofers, but i have an extremely sensitive headphone, boosting ANY kind of bass and judging by that its kind of weak to the ears. which might be a compressing/mastering issue aswell.
i understand BlueOceans statement about the synths, its kinda messy (hard to hear)
but i already mentioned that it might be a mastering issue.
Thanks for the review! You've picked up on some issues I had with mastering this song, since I used a lot of raw sounds (particularly manipulating 3xOsc). I'm not really used to the process of Eq'ing these kind of harsh sawtooth sounds, but I'll get used to it!
With regards to the bass problem, It seemed to muffle the song slightly for some reason, I got a much clearer sound when I removed my sub, so that's why you've noticed the lack of low end :) I'll have to include it for my next one!
Thanks as always.
There were too many similar sounding synths playing at the same time and that was annoying to listen to. I felt like this song was super repetitive, but I don't know if that's how house music is supposed to be. My favorite part of the song were the parts with the vocals. I think you should have had vocals through out the entire song like in pop music, and had more lyrics. This could have worked better as a pop song imo.
Thanks for the review! House (and the many subgenres contained within) Is designed to be repetitive. I don't actually have many vocals available at the moment, so i'm challenging myself to work with less! I'm not sure what you mean regarding the similar sounding synths though dude! I have sine waves, sawtooth waves, square waves and even a triangle in there somewhere! Thanks for sounding your opinion though, I appreciate it.