i like

the bassy plucks you have,
the weird percussion
but i dont like how this is mastered.
maybe i confused you with something..
but kicks are really really harmfull when you use compression, cz the compression takes allot of the kicks bass part away with the incomplete/wrong settings.

the PAD sound which comes in slowly around 1:10 is having ALLOT of reverb.
trance songs are known for their use of reverb but this is a over the top if you get me :)

other then that i think the tension is quite high.. you should lower some volume on the PAD :)
and add the FL 'Grossbeat' with the Sidechain setting. helps allot.

one other thing is that i cannot hear any 'seperate' bass, apart from your melody's.

well.. these are my pointers so far mannn, keep rocking, youll get there eventually.