Very nice, great build up while still being "chill" I cant quite point our any real flaws but its not quite there yet, and im not sure how you would get it there, but keep working at it. You defiantly have the potential, make some more, experiment with different things, like I personally love a little instrumental mixed in with the electronic, maybe even vocals, idk, have fun like you said. I hope to hear more great stuff from you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.