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I changed the strings of my guitar so i think it sounds much better so i got inspired and make this song, i still don't have a lyric for it but i'll have one. I use Audacity for the details

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I liked this song, I just feel that it could use more polish. Now don't get me wrong, when I say polish, I don't mean in the actual sound of the guitar. The sound is very raw and complements the overall tone of the song.

What I mean is that the transitions between each riff in the song could have been handled better. While the song (I think) is supposed to give off that confusing vibe, there's a difference between confusing and jarring, and that is what each transition is.

There are times in the song where there's a riff going and it just randomly changes without any rhyme or reason. One way to fix this would be to make each riff flow into the next, like slowly changing the tune of the guitar into the next riff or gradually gaining pace into another. That would make the song flow much more smoothly and make the song sound more cohesive and less jarring.


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PANFLETIN responds:

thanks dude!!! and yeah i have a little bit of a problem changing between one rhythm to other i'm going to work on that, also i record this the moment i came up with the song so i totally agree with you i guess that without the amp it sound better haha

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Oct 15, 2012
10:43 PM EDT
General Rock
File Info
2.2 MB
2 min 24 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.