Nice little dissonant jam, didn't dig it as much as the others, you could try making the switch happen sooner, making it a chorus\verse\chorus\verse format. Also, the rocking out part is pretty cool, but could do with a little bit more complex progression, I know it's not easy to just come up with something that sounds great and isn't simple at the same time when it comes to rock riffs, but keep on trying out new stuff, see if it fits into the existing idea.