I concur with fredtheguy, it lacks organization, but it isnt a bad thing. I know a lot of good songs that are random. It sounds nice, and I like it (4.5/5)
Thanks for reviewing!!
This was pretty good. The only criticism I could think of was that I couldn't detect any form or organization. That's generally not a bad thing, but it kinda bugged me. The fact that there was a recurring leitmotif helped though.
Now for the good stuff. The EQ on this was done very nicely. Nothing sounded too airy or artificial. Then there's the beat in the background. It had a nice fluctuation to it; light 'tch' sound, then a rich clapping sound, repeated over and over again. I can't quite put it into words, but the pacing of it was interesting. Also, I disagree with zelazon's comment on the emptiness. I think this actually had a fair bit of atmosphere to it, and the parts where everything but the lead was silenced only made it more interesting by shifting in and out of an ambient atmosphere.
Overall, this was a really good song, but the lack of organization hurt it a bit.
Some of my songs are a little messy haha
You have a really good song on your hands, but it sounds really empty atm... it gets better as it progresses, but it never really leave the empty feeling. You could use a stableSub bass to get rid of the empty feeling, and some pads to create some atmosphere.
Otherwise, solid song you have here.
Thanks for your help!
Why is the ranking on this so low? There is a good mix to this song that is very enjoyable.
Thanks for the opinion
Could be TONS better. But right now it's just a "MEH" kind of song.
A little more variation would go a long way.
Thanks! I'll work on it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.