Nifty sound here

Wow I have to say that this was a nifty sound that you have going on here with this one and some good mixture in the beat going on some added back end sound might accent it more but regardless this was a cool mix you have here some really nice work here on this one I like the idea of this one so really nice job on this one.

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some added back end sound might accent it mor

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I was instantly engaged. It feels nice and fresh. The transition at :44 didn't seem to lead anywhere, though, and I wasn't crazy about the variations at :45. Similarly to "The Battle," it doesn't have a lot of substance at some points. The randomness didn't exactly work for me- I like songs with structure, but that's just me. The transition needs to be smoother at 2:58, and I think in general you need harmonize more. It's also a little repetitive at times. It's really catchy and I like the instruments and mood, though. I just think it needs to be more connected. It loops pretty well, but it's pretty long for a loop. I would probably end it with a bass-y D, held for at least a measure or two. ;) ...but I probably shouldn't tell you exactly how to end your piece. Good start; it just needs to be cleaned up around the edges. Keep up the good work! :)

i'm feeling this one ... Got my head bopping nice work , keep it up!

Awesome! This is one of those tracks when I wish there was a 4.5 rating because 4 seems too low.

Have a 5/5 instead! :D

awesome piece you got here. im liking it!