I was instantly engaged. It feels nice and fresh. The transition at :44 didn't seem to lead anywhere, though, and I wasn't crazy about the variations at :45. Similarly to "The Battle," it doesn't have a lot of substance at some points. The randomness didn't exactly work for me- I like songs with structure, but that's just me. The transition needs to be smoother at 2:58, and I think in general you need harmonize more. It's also a little repetitive at times. It's really catchy and I like the instruments and mood, though. I just think it needs to be more connected. It loops pretty well, but it's pretty long for a loop. I would probably end it with a bass-y D, held for at least a measure or two. ;) ...but I probably shouldn't tell you exactly how to end your piece. Good start; it just needs to be cleaned up around the edges. Keep up the good work! :)
Wow that's a lot of stuff
I'll start fixing em up!
i'm feeling this one ... Got my head bopping nice work , keep it up!
Haha thanks for reviewin!
Awesome! This is one of those tracks when I wish there was a 4.5 rating because 4 seems too low.
Have a 5/5 instead! :D
Thanks for the good rating and reviewing!
awesome piece you got here. im liking it!
Thanks for reviewing!!
That bassline is rockin. Way to go. I'm setting up my new computer now. It is hard. LOL
Thanks for reviewing!
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