Different
Its definately original. Sounds you used I thought were on the right track but maybe something with a deeper sound. Doesnt matter though, Some of my best stuff that people have liked were old tracks that I went back to years later and heard different things that I didnt hear the first time. All in all I like it because its original and its not the same boring beats that I hear everyday, Unfortunately in this day and age in the music industry its hard to stay original and make money. Keep on making music.