Its definately original. Sounds you used I thought were on the right track but maybe something with a deeper sound. Doesnt matter though, Some of my best stuff that people have liked were old tracks that I went back to years later and heard different things that I didnt hear the first time. All in all I like it because its original and its not the same boring beats that I hear everyday, Unfortunately in this day and age in the music industry its hard to stay original and make money. Keep on making music.
Needs a little polich here and there - beats themselves are alright if a little repetitive but that's not necessarily a bad thing for this style.
I have to be honest - I hated the timbres - the instruments used for the bassline were annoying - they felt way too thin and weak which took away from the piece. Fatten up that bass - add a subbass perhaps?
Not sure if you're sidechaining or compressing the persussion but - or if you're even doing either - again - my biggest complaint was that it just wasn't fat enough - the gated drums were good but the overall impression of this track was that it was an amateur piece.
To fix that you'll need to get better samples and work on the instruments a little.
Other than that it was decent work - I'm voting 4/5 on this.
yeah threw this together at three in the morn jumped up made that sick bass thing but timbre i could of put more thought intothanks for the input
Sick beat mayn, Can't tell tha ifference between South and West beats, but BOTH of them melodies r grimey. I like wen its goin ^ - . _
Like tha bass on this 1
keep it up
Thankx West side came after south i felt the west sounded like still dre ahahha
i like the beat to this song keep it up.
thanks checked your shit nice an like you style how did you find the south side part?