a little syncopation eh?

Syncopation never hurt anyone! - Something about this sounds so familiar though - I can't quite put my finger on it... Pre-Existing loops maybe? Can't tell..

Either way - it's quite smooth enough and it goes down nice and easy so it gets a 5.

I love that you're experimenting a little with glitching up the track a bit. That's my thing - really glitchy filthy percussion - You could have pushed it a bit farther - make the transition from smooth to really chopped up.

Keep it up though - really nice work.

I mentioned in another review that you should consider a hip-hop/idm mix - I've been looking for a hip-hop artist or two that would be interested in a collab like that - if you're interested then contact me and we'll blow the doors off of this place.

Hmmm its a little underactive

Your drum pattern is top notch but those melodies are a bit simplistic and annoying. Not to say that simple is ineffective but its just been done a little wrong. For your type of style i suggest listening to some of the late Jay Dee's beats as i can see your looking for a somewhat soulful and relaxing tune here.
Keep going ull get it! u got ma bak man!

its ok

why ok. those sounds i reconized from a programe before i dont think it will be good idear to use that why? saved the sizes to big.
cuse did u use acid pro 4? or what eveer version ur using of it just curius thats enways cool song u put tegether.