nice job

i really like the first half of this track the second part kind of through me off

Nice track

The piano could have been either a little more Rhodesish or a little more music-boxy this sounded like it fell right in between - I would have liked a smoother set of keys. Perhaps an ever so slightly longer attack?

The hits were... a little less than awesome but not too bad overall. The Vox took away - you really should have processed it a little. the whole ya-ga-yaw thing just didn't feel right - sounded more like someones laxative was kickin in and they were trying not to shit themself...

:D

The SFX that you used for the transition between the lullaby and the hook was way too high - both in colume and in frequency.

Your percussion was good and the melody itself was also nice.

Overall a good job though - I'd love to hear something like this segway into some IDM but then that's not really your style - it could work though - if you ever want to try it just contact me.

I'm voting 4 - there was too much more you could have done with this and it seemed to end very abrubptly.

One of your better tracks though!

peace

cool this song awsome.

nice u new one is ok to the beat are good of hwat u added in there of the Brooklyn one.
mabye cuse i didint hered it. this cool song dude.
i like that synth sounds that comes in with the song. cool nice work keep it up did u saw my new one out? chek it out then wyle ur at it.

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1st time I saw ya stuff today, an this is your best 1 I think.

I like the 1st melody, tha drum beats go perfect with it and just when It was about to get repetative, the second kicks in.

Your style is pretty original compared to some of tha stuff thats here.

keep it up