Minus the poorly done ending, this was really great. Sooooo smooth, though it did feel a little repetitive at 1:25 when you introduced the new pattern, largely due to the lack of background (the lazy way around this problem is just reducing the number of repeats). On the ending, the fact that you only let the remaining noises die down for half a second seemed a bit... abrupt. It feels like it could loop really well, but you haven't done that either. If you fixed the issue with the finish, it'd be 5/5.
Just my opinion.
So im cleaning my room while browsing NG for all the new music (trust me cleaning this room is not a small task). So I'm listening to this song and as I go to take a trash bag out I miss one of the steps outside my door and fall right on my face...Then I realize my head is still bobbing to the beat with this and I'm like "damn, this a pretty good song"
Really though, great song.
Haha That was great story bro
Love it! 1:28-1:40 threw me off a bit, but quickly grasped me back. But the rest was Stellar! only other thing that i didnt care for was.... the name. to me it just doesnt fit. but thats me lol. Keep up the awesome work me Friend.
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