This song is made up of too many annoying souding presets, even the drum track is a preset (but it sounds good lol, keep it). Try using some different sounds, especially for the lead saw thing, it just sounds like a buzz in my ears.
This is not a bad song, I'm not going to lie, the effects/transitions/song structure and all were all good.
Also, if you want to make it sound like hard trance, raise the volume of the bass and have a stronger, punchier kick drum.
(P.S. this song loops PERFECTLY!)