I used Benjadaninja's beat to see if I could change up my flow, thought it would work out well...
Tell me what you think about it.
c&c?
::EDIT::
I added more so Benjadaninja likes it more, and I tried to improve the flow a bit.
Again, at the end I start losing it, this is difficult for me :P
Like the new version?
Man
I can never tell the HUGE difference between your old flow and this one? I can tell it seems a little different I guess, but dude, you have your own original flow. Take advantage of that, I've honestly never heard too many people with the flow that you have.
Also, once you have your own flow, even if you try to change the flow, your old flow seeps through. :) I've got the problem in which I have a different flow on almost every track. Lol
Stay up! This is great!
Thanks man. Im trying to create my own flow, Im still fine tuning it though.
When I drop my new song that I am trying to finish up by the weekend, you will see it more tuned.
Love your input bro.
Agree with Dureagon
Yeah, everything was great until those last few second. Also at the very beginning.
I gave a 10 since was your first attempt at this style of rapping. For the most part, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
To be honest, though I like your original style the best :)
Yeah me too lol.
Im re-doing this one. i think youll like it better when its finally complete.
This was just a taste lol.
pretty sick!
Flow style was nice! Lyrics were top notch! Im not a pro mixer by any means, but I think it could be mixed a bit better. My thought would be to turn down the voxs a tad and add some ad libs. Those are my thoughts. This is a great submission nonetheless. 5d and Keep up!
Klazik
Thanks man.
I suck at mixing, never really done it. I might need some help on that lol.
Rough around the edges but overall...
not bad. The content of your rhymes are pretty good. Its your delivery that needs some work especially toward the end. you stumble a bit at the end and the lines become jumbled and off beat a bit. The slower bits are good and the way your voice drones with the beat is nice. Keep revising your flow and im sure itll come around to greatness.
Thanks man.
I agree, I am having trouble getting a consistent form of flow, but this was just to see how well I can do now. I see much room for improvement and I intend to achieve it.
Even though im not a rapper XP
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
HeIsAlive 
