A little repetitive, but it could go somewhere
Getting yourself more vocal samples is the key here, as would be a little more variation in the melody (to me, that sounds pretty non-existent in the early going of the piece)
The pace is good, as is the beat. Combining them with something higher pitched and synth based would be the way forward, just to relieve the monotony of the piece. You cna change the melody, while leaving the bass the same. It makes such a difference to the dynamic of the track.
Pauses in the middle, to let people check that they are still alive, before launching off into another tirade is always another good thing to consider in the long run.
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