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CLUBeRz (WIP)

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Dunno How this turned out rly... but im aiming for something...i put it out here just 2 c how its goin
i dident get much feed back on the other 1s
but ull c whut this gives out :3
so plz review
^^

anyways ima give away some fun facts about it lmao xD

here goes:
project started on 30-3-10 21:37
hours spent on it 3:02
15 patterns
17 effects
some ideas from SinZ (from his track) as i heard his music i got this 1 in my head....well some of it xD

TRY2Enjoy

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Feelin' the beat

Could use a stronger finish. Otherwise I really enjoyed this.

Review Request Club

I think it maybe starts off a little too strong, though that could have been my fault for having the volume up pretty high xD.
I like the initial beat; you've got a nice set of synths there which at first, seem to work well together, but once you get into the main beat you see that this track could use some mastering; all the synths are kinda piled on top of one another, so the lead synth begins to drown out everything else, even the lighter parts of the drum track. I think this could use a remix or some mastering to it, just to try and separate the streams out a little more so they can all be heard in the way they're meant to.

And while the synths work with eachother, I'm not entire sure they work for this genre; like some other people in the RRC said, its the kind of sound you'd expect more in an 8-bit rather than a House track. The drums could have also maybe done with having more of a prominent role, because they were shelved in the background maybe a little too much.

In all, it's got a pretty solid set of ideas, it just needs a little reshuffling so we can get to hear them all better :P But do keep it up, cause this has promise, and mixing aside all the sounds...sound good! What more do you want? :P

-Review Request Club

Nice

The beat is quite nice, but I have the feeling that I heard something like this before in the Audio Portal. Maybe it's from a song of you that I already reviewed, heh.

Anyway, I think you should work on the mastering a bit more. The background melodies are sometimes nearly drowned out by the lead melody, which is a real pity.

{ Review Request Club }

Nice Beat...

I really liked this main beat, it's very catchy, since I can't stop singing this synt. beat inside my head, it's a very good beat, and when it's together with the drums, it gets even better, man!! The drums are very good, I think they have a nice mix with the beat, it's a very good result, I liked so much the final result of the two beats together...

The other sound elements are very well made, I think they fit very well together in the whole song, it sounded good, a little metallic and it's kind of 8-bit, like GST said before...

But, anyways, I really think that's a good and pleasant song, I liked it, but Ifeel that you can make more improvements, and the song will be even cooler, man, keep it up with the good work. I expect to listen more good songs from you!!

(Review Request Club)
Roger

DavidRx responds:

thx alot for the compliments ^^
and yea gst said about the 8-bit still i dun c where :S
^^ yea ima improve on this track
and u will listen 2 more ^^ just go 2 my page once in a while :D

and plz do review +_+

anyways..i was thinkin of some vocal for this track O,o

cud u help me?

i wanted some male voice of female...dun matter

that theyd record this:

''an epic journey too...House''

if ud help id put ure name in the creditz ^^,

oh and yea :O

cud u plz listen 2 this song? :D
and review 2 as a RRC? ^^,

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/323635

Good

This was good, but there are some problems.

The mastering is quite bad, really. Everything is kind of mashed together, and it ruins the feel of the song.

I don't like the "lazerbeam" synth used for the lead melody, it makes the song seem too 8bit.

The drums could use a bit of improvement, you could hardly hear them. In House the drums are very accentuated "House is like Trance but with a heavy emphasis on the drums".

Really, other that that, this was a good song. I look forward to hearing more from you.

-GST-

!Review Request Club!

DavidRx responds:

yea i ussualy mash everything into 1 Fx channel o_o
cuz i did some preset thut i named ''real'' and its kinda bassy and all but it gives out rly 2 much reverb cuz of the maximus :S

but then again i learn something everytime a make a song :]
i pinpoint out my flaws and what i did good in a song :D
so thx for pointin out thut ^^. wont happen again ;D

hmmm lazerbeam? =o
ill check thut 1 out :]

whut do u mean by heavy emphasis
ima put a sidechainer on the drums porting 2 the master so u can hear it better :] and give a extra feel 2 it ^^,

but plz explain 2 me whut u mean by the house drums :D
id rly like 2 learn about it ^^,

hopefully when i get on workin on it again and release the full 1 it will be better +.+

thx so much for ure review..and if ure intrested look at my work...my latest 1...basshunter remix camilla :D review thut 1 ^^ if u want 2

thx again for the review u RRC guys rock :D ha!

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Votes
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Score
4.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 31, 2010
8:20 AM EDT
Genre
House
File Info
Song
4.2 MB
1 min 50 sec

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